I’d go for a sample of the full short story expansion first. The visceral, bodily tension you’ve already built is so gripping that leaning into immediate, cinematic horror could really ratchet the fear up.

We could push the entity’s presence into every small movement—twitches, mirrored gestures, maybe even subtle changes in the narrator’s own reflection—so the horror is felt physically as well as mentally. That would let us maintain your sensory layering while giving the reader a more palpable “I can’t look away” kind of dread.

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